My wand test

I was walking down the streets of diagone ally I noticed a wand shop I was curious if I could get a wand for myself. So I step into the shop and looked around for awhile. Until suddenly a old man pops out behind me, "AHHH!" I said frightenly he just popped out of no where with a grin on his face and he gladly said, "I bet you are looking for a wand correct?" I gladly nodded my head and followed him to the back of the shop and he took me into a dark room. He turn on the lights all I saw was one wand in a case in a empty room. I picked it up and all of a sudden a great mist came around me and it went away. I paid the old man the cash for the wand and left happly out of the shop that I got my first wand.

Brilliant work...Professor!?

Thank you Fred.

Superb..
Nice work prof.

I dont think this needs any grading! 35 points to Ravenclaw!