My wand test

As I walk into Ollivanders: Makers of fine wands since 382 BC. Mr. Ollivander turned around "hello luna" he said to me. "hi Mr. Ollivander I said to him as I shook his hand. Mr. Ollivander walked to the very back of his shop. After a few minutes of cluttering around he walked back. "Here's a wand that no one has tested in 200 years." Wow I thought as Mr. Ollivander handed the wand to me. It was Oak with a phoenix feather. "Its very pretty." I commented. "Oh Not only that its very powerful too." Mr. Ollivander told me.
I waved the wand. Slowly it started to glow and it felt as if the size was getting smaller matching the size of my hand.
Mr. Ollivander took a step forward and he said "Wow many witches and wizards have tried this wand but it usally just broke something but you..." My father barged in and inturpted Mr. Ollivander. "Come on Luna its time to go" he told me. "Bye Mr. Ollivander" I said turning to leave. Mr. Ollivander just waved as I left. "Thats a nice wand Luna" My father said. "Yeah it is." I replied taking a last glance at Mr. Ollivanders shop.

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