My wand test

I got my first wand from my dad, but it didn't work, because I didn't earn it. My dad knew what was the matter. So he took me to Diagon Alley. We've been walking and walking, when he said: "Here we are." I was a bit confused, because I was never there before. Before we entered, I saw the text, and I knew it's Mr. Ollivander's shop, shop my dad was talking about alot. And he told to Mr. Ollivander that I need a wand. We've been testing wands and testing, we've tested about fifty wands, when I got another one. Nothing... And then, at next one, fifty-second, I felt so ... I don't know how to describe this feeling... Comfortable with it. Like real magic would be happening inside my body. Mr. Ollivander saw that and he said: "Well, we've finally found the right one!" We paid and left the shop. And then we remembered we have to buy also other things for Hogwarts. But about that maybe some other time.

That was Very Well Written

25 Points to Gryffindor!

-Head Master

Good job Harry Malfoy :)

>.< Really good I liked it!