my wand test

I walked through the shabby paths of Diagon Alley, well, i must say that my feet was wet and i grew uncomfortable, it was bizarre that such a feeling had cropped inside me,I came past the Olivanders wand shop and i remembered i must !buy something from here just As I flicked my owl form the Head Master at Hogwarts, and yes it was a wand ....I entered the shop just as the bell at the Entrance tingled and the man of his very wise age came hurtling by and asked me "What may i do for you?", I replied sarcastically to him "Dont you know dumb head, that the youngest of the Malfoys have entered his magical academic age? Now bring me a wand!".... i waited for the old man to go towards the shelves which obviously was dusted due to the many wands kept there, he came back and gave me a box with silver strands attached on it, I took the wand and flicked it on the near by shelf, and I saw that wand box coming to me of its own, just like its flying on its own!

I gave the wand to Mr ollivander and snatched the box that came to me and looked and surveyed it,then I took it and I felt the energy coming towards me....Flowing through me, I paid what he demanded and said him "Dumbass, Next time, make sure you know what job you do!" I said blinded by my pride of selecting my own wand

Well, Not Bad I must say but I think you can Improve a bit more! 30 points to slytherin!

-Head Master

Thankyou Head Master, and yes, I will improve

Very impressive, Draco. Nice way to show off your real character. :P

Absolutely, show off, but not here.